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    Naval Academy Personal statement

    Pima, The second I clicked submit, I realized how old the thread was. It was quite embarrassing. However, I was able to find this thread and I'm sure a future applicant will, too. Hopefully the applicant considers all the advice in the thread. Thank you for the good luck! Hopefully I can have...
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    Naval Academy Personal statement

    dhenry94, A word of advice, avoid writing in 2nd person and using "to be" verbs (was, is, are, etc) You do not want to just tell your story, but instead SHOW your story. The reader should be able to picture what they are reading and feel inspired or moved. Definitely utilize as many...
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