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Thanks everyone! Thank you all for your criticisms and suggestions. You guys are great. I'm very impressed with the helpfulness and knowledgeably of this community. Thanks again! Please relay any further input. Gil

I have a nomination from my Representative

In the meantime, I'd still appreciate any input on my Personal Statement. Thanks!

Oh, okay. Thank you.

I would like to, now that I've gotten some good suggestions, however it appears that the admin has disabled my ability to edit/delete my post.

Dear Administrator Administrator: Please enable me to delete this thread or edit my original post. I would like to prevent my work from being stolen. Thank you, Gil

Okay, thank you!

Probably so, but the other events certainly played a role. Perhaps I could try something like this in the final paragraph: "There was no single experience—not the events on 9/11, in scouting, or at my grandfather's funeral—that led to my interest in naval service, but some combination thereof...

MDN18: Do you think the ambiguity in my interest could be fixed by simply stating something like "It was this combination of events which led to my pursuit of a naval career"?

MDN18: Very helpful. Thank you!! Gil

I did not attend Stem or NASS

Thank you! My best ACT was a 28 and my GPA is 3.8/4.8. I think I have a good bit of community involvement & leadership (Eagle Scout w/ 4 palms, SG President, Model UN, NHS, 2 varsity sports, Florida Youth Volunteer of the Year). I just hope it's enough. Thank you for the feedback.

Hi everyone! I'm new here, so please bear with me. I'm finishing up my USNA Personal Statement and I'd appreciate any input. It's still a bit rough and I'm not entirely sure how I should conclude it. All suggestions and criticisms are appreciated. Thank you! 1. Describe what led to your initial...