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anonymousgoat

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I just finished my essay for the Naval Academy and would like for someone to read over it and tell me what they think. All critique/commentary is welcome; the Naval Academy is my first choice so I'll gladly accept any advice that would improve my essay. I'll PM it to you if your interested, thanks in advance. :redface:
 
I just finished my essay for the Naval Academy and would like for someone to read over it and tell me what they think. All critique/commentary is welcome; the Naval Academy is my first choice so I'll gladly accept any advice that would improve my essay. I'll PM it to you if your interested, thanks in advance. :redface:

You didn't say, "I won't to go to the Naval Academy because it's free," did you? :shake:
 
Essay

Anonymous,

I am willing to read it for you. Check your private mail.

GoNavyMom
 
Honor Concept implications.

Be very careful. The USMA application spells it out: candidate statements may be proofread for grammar and spelling only, but must otherwise be the candidate's work and ideas. Although USNA is not so explicit, I would think that the expectation is the same.
 
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