Admissions Essay Help

Discussion in 'Naval Academy - USNA' started by anonymousgoat, Sep 21, 2009.

  1. anonymousgoat

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    I just finished my essay for the Naval Academy and would like for someone to read over it and tell me what they think. All critique/commentary is welcome; the Naval Academy is my first choice so I'll gladly accept any advice that would improve my essay. I'll PM it to you if your interested, thanks in advance. :redface:
     
  2. Memphis9489

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    You didn't say, "I won't to go to the Naval Academy because it's free," did you? :shake:
     
  3. WBK

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    Yes...that'd be very bad!XD
     
  4. anonymousgoat

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    Anyone willing to read it for me?
     
  5. GoNavyMom

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    Essay

    Anonymous,

    I am willing to read it for you. Check your private mail.

    GoNavyMom
     
  6. mmb5

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    Honor Concept implications.

    Be very careful. The USMA application spells it out: candidate statements may be proofread for grammar and spelling only, but must otherwise be the candidate's work and ideas. Although USNA is not so explicit, I would think that the expectation is the same.
     

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