Candidate Writing Sample

Discussion in 'Air Force Academy - USAFA' started by Raptor Factor, Oct 20, 2013.

  1. Raptor Factor

    Raptor Factor Member

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    Is anyone willing to read my essay and give some feedback? I wasn't sure if it was supposed to read like a story (as personal statements for other colleges are supposed to). Thanks, Hayden
     
  2. ameisen_zug

    ameisen_zug Reapplicant

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    Send it my way. I was wondering that too. If you have a chance, would you be interested in looking at one of mine? I still need to edit it though.
     
  3. Raptor Factor

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    Ok I'll PM you. I would be happy to look at yours if you want.
     
  4. lillian

    lillian Candidate

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    I'm really good at proofreading, if you need any help with grammar, style, or spelling.
     
  5. Raptor Factor

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    PM sent. Much appreciated!
     

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