No need for sorry. Going off topic for a minute, but I feel for you and lurkers, this is a learning moment.
We all get your excitement, BUT you need to sit back for a second before posting.
1. THINGS CHANGE
~ What occurred 2 yrs ago may not be the same for your yr group.
~~ IE back in 07 they appointed 1650 +/- for USAFA. Since 09 it has been @1300 +/-
Pulling up a 12 yr old thread makes people think that nothing has changed over the course of the last decade, but it has. I bet my beloved dog that there will be some tweaking this yr compared to last yr. It might be minor, but with every minor tweak, eventually it becomes a major change over a decade.
2. POSTERS LEAVE
~ 50% of the people on the threads you are reviving left the building. Hit their name and you can see their latest posts. Regarding this thread some have not been here for yrs.
3. BREATHE
~ We get it. You want this bad. However, IMPO you are going in WAY TOO DEEP regarding USAFA. Enjoy your senior yr in HS. Apply for your plan B. C, D etc including ROTC scholarship.
~~ If you want to do the deep delve of threads, look at the TWE threads and click on those posters names. Many are ADAF now, because they had plan B, C, D, etc in place.
4. THIS IS AN ANOYMOUS FORUM
~ My pet peeve. Don't ask people to read your essay for USAFA or your MOC.
~~ Think about it from a reverse aspect. Some poster says something akin to your post...want to read my essay, pm me. You respond YEP. They send it to you via a PM. This is like the blind leading the blind. You are in HS, reading and critiquing another 17/18 yr old's essay. How is it that you, as a HS student wanting the exact same thing, can evaluate their essay? Last time I checked you don't have a college degree, all you are is a peer, an applicant or candidate at best.
~~~ I also am cynical. Since this is an anonymous forum, you don't know where they live. They could live in your state, and the next thing you know is they lifted parts of your essay for the MoC nom. Sen. A committee reads yours and theirs...wow, I see similarities, wonder which applicant wrote this, and which one plagiarized?
5. THIS IS A MARATHON
~ You are not even at step 5. Most appointees will not find out until March Mass Mailing, or iows 6 months from now...see above...BREATHE
~~ You are talking about in this and another post about breathing masks to prep for attending BCT. However, you have yet to secure a NOMINATION. Nor your ALO interview or your DoDMERB exam, both can trip you up. Talk about putting the cart before the horse! (Sorry)
~~~ See above regarding the TWE and plan B.C and D.
JMPO, but pull back a little. Use the search function. Read, read and digest what has been stated in the past.