College,
No offense, but those are not hooks.
I am going to be harsh. Those are average ECs in todays applicant world.
Hooks are something that nobody else has to fill the square for them.
~ I.E. national debate team! National robotics award.
~~~~ Before you use your classmate as an example, they may have had a hook. They could be 1/4 Native American. They could have been a legacy. Their essay of overcoming something tragic could have been a hook. 1910 in VA would be the At this time...letter.
Have you looked at naviance? Have you joined collegconfidentual.com? UVA from my understanding does not talk to ROTC for admission. IOWS you could get the NROTC scholarship, but not the admission acceptance.
More harsh reality. My kids 4 APs is not a hook. Your competition will have 8 or 9 and a ton of ECs too. Our DD's hook was her rising senior summer she was a volunteer at summer sleep away camp for Young Life as a Life Guard working with disadvantage kids. She is not in ROTC. Her sophomore year she went to summer camp with young life to train for a month. ~~~Again, commitment is being illustrated.
~~ She had hundreds of hours for volunteering at the local soup kitchen on Saturdays throughout her entire high school career.
~~~ She rode horses as her athletics since she was 8.
~~~ Had her life saving and CPR certificate.
~~~ She was in both AP and IB courses, plus the AICE program.{Cambridge). Graduate Magna Cum Laude in her class. I believe she had 9 AP/IBs.
~~~ French Honor Society, Booster club, SADD, etc on her his transcript.
Her ACT best sitting was 28, she took it once. Her SAT super for M/V was 1310. She did not apply to UVA, VT was her dream. She was deferred for ED as in state applicant.
Just saying, I think you don't realize yet how competitive it is in VA. OBTW, her cgpa was on a 7 point scale.
Are you an NMSF recipient. If so, you need to place it on your resume. If you don't know what it is than you are not NMSF.
~ NMSF and NMF are hooks. Take a look at those college websites under the stats. They typically state the % of students that are because it is a selling point academically.
~ You also should know NMSF traditionally translates into the big merit scholarships at each college. It is their recruiting tool.
I am going to say this in kindness, but it is time for you to be realistic, and instead of defending yourself...this is not a debate you are partaking in, and trying to win... Take heed to those that have experience in this process.
We are more than happy' to eat crow.
I just think that you are entrenched in your defense to such a point that this is becoming a futile exercise. You believe that your stats, and circumstances are unique to overcome the lack of sports. Posters that have been here a long time disagree with you. Your resume is strong, but it is not OMG the best thing since hot sliced bread. It is you are a contender.
Looking at your list I can see an NROTC scholarship being offered, but no admittance to the colleges. I.E.Yale is a high reach for you with a 2200 and 4 APs, but maybe not so much for NROTC scholarship since they are not powerhouses like Notre Same, UCLA, etc where they have no problem filling those slates.
Kinnem, the tear in your eye is because now after years in the system it has hit home and you see something different than when he wrote it 2 years ago. You are now seeing the end of the ROTC tunnel, and all of the great things that are yet to come. The best will be commissioning. My heart still stops when I relive that day, watching Bullet commission our DS. The ups and downs over four years were worth that two minutes watching the torch passed from a father to a son.