Proofread/ Critique my essay?

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  1. kfacademy

    kfacademy USMA Appointee 2017

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    Hi I dont have anyone to read my essay so I thought maybe someone on here would be willing. It is my essay for my MOC. Thanks :smile:
     
  2. Dad

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    I'm not sure that sharing your paper with annonymous strangers would be a good idea. Just write it with your own voice. Be honest and accurate with your details.

    Perhaps you could visit your HS English teacher from last year and ask them to review your completed paper. Ask your parents. Another resource may be your ALO/MALO/B&GO. If they have the time, I'm sure they'd be willing to help you out.

    Best wishes. :thumb:
     
  3. Dixieland

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    I agree with Dad. :thumb:
     
  4. AF6872

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    Dad is correct:thumb:
     
  5. kfacademy

    kfacademy USMA Appointee 2017

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    Well I didnt actually copy and paste my essay into the forum for that very reason. :) I am not in HS anymore, my parents dont really understand what the academies are looking for but at least I got the grammar kinks worked out. Thanks anyway.
     

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