tips on writing a sa essay for congressmens or reps

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  1. kimsol101

    kimsol101 New Member

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    Im writing an essay for my congressmen Eliot Engel and I need tips or guidelines on how to write an essay. Im on the progress on writing it right now but I dont know what to put in it? I wrote down abuot the tradition of the school, and also i wrote down how I am a better candidate the most of the people that are applying not be cocky or anything just trying to put a little bit of a kick into the essay trying to get the congressmens attention. if anyone has any tips or guide lines please post them up will help me alot on trying to get a nom for the class of 2014 for the naval and military academy thanks
     
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    What academy are you going to? Anyways, tell them why you strive to attend your academy; what you will give back to the forces and the US,ect. If you are going to mention why you would be more qualified than others to attend your academy, it should be said with confidence, but in no way bragging. Thats all I have. Hope that helps, get started on those academy essays!:thumb:

    Also, please by all means tell us a little about yourself on the introductions page!

    USMAalltheway
     
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    kimsol101 New Member

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    thanks for the advice and yes i will put an introduction on my profile as soon as possible. I am applying to two academies USNA and USMA. I know i have to choose one of the academy. if possible will it be okay it you can read my nom essay and see if it needs any changes for right now I mean criticism will help me alot on my essay and goal into trying to get into the service academy. thanks

    USNA and USMA candidate for class of 2014
     
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    Cool, sure man, I would be fine reading your essay. PM me!

    USMAalltheway
     

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