I might add that the prompt also had the following topics it wanted in the essay:
1. Single Greatest challenge in attending an academy
2. Genesis of interest for an academy
3. 2 greatest strengths that me me standout
4. What drives your desire to serve as an officer, and what are your service goals
Does this redeem this essay at all?
1. Single Greatest challenge in attending an academy
2. Genesis of interest for an academy
3. 2 greatest strengths that me me standout
4. What drives your desire to serve as an officer, and what are your service goals
Does this redeem this essay at all?