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Thank you so much! I love how when I was reading yours, I knew exactly were the mistakes were made from my original. I saw it looked different in those places. Such as, full-out = throughout Thank you, everyone so much for helping. It is much better than the original post. Thank you.

This will most likely be my final revision. Since I have to leave early in about 2 hours. Unless some appreciated person finds something before then. This is what I did, and corrected, after really sitting down, and thinking it through. This has no corrections from an English teacher. I hope...

2018. An special opportunity came up, they extended my time, to be able to get everything completed in time. Since, I started later in the process. This is a special circumstance. I´m trying to jump on this chance.

Wow, I did not notice those before. I see exactly what your saying. The second I reread the sentences, before you put the corrections, I instantly replaced the words you suggested in those spots. Thank you, I now understand, and will fix them. Only problem is my English teacher will not be...

Here is a click revision from the suggestions you mentioned. I will try to work on it more, and bring it to my English teacher tomorrow. Is there anything else I missed that was mentioned for corrections above? My desire to become a pilot is what sparked my interest in the Air Force. At the...

Thank you. I very well appreciate the feedback. I will go over it again, then bring it to my English teacher tomorrow.

Thank you so much that helped a lot. I will go over and fix those easy mistakes.

Thank you very much to anyone that helps! Very appreciated! Thanks -Paul Mills

I´m very sure this has many punctuation mistakes, and sentences that sound weird that need to be rewritten. I have not taken it to my English teacher yet, and I plan on doing so soon. I wanted to get some feed back on some content that does not necessarily need to be put in. Is this a good...