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Thank you both for the constructive criticism, this is what I need.

If it's alright reading your essays for summer seminar would be very helpful. Thanks, Brock.

It's not a bad story, but I feel like the way you explain some of the things you did in Mexico is a bit cliche. Maybe include a bit of dialogue from the conversation that you had with Felipe, to convey what was going through your mind at that time. Will do, thank you for the advice.

Here is my essay so far. I am applying for the Summer Seminar class for the summer of 2022. Any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated. Do you have any personal life experiences where you have overcome adversity or challenges that have shaped you into the person you are today...