air force nomination essay

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    Would anybody like to proofread my ¨Why I want to attend an academy¨ nomination essay?

    I´m very sure this has many punctuation mistakes, and sentences that sound weird that need to be rewritten. I have not taken it to my English teacher yet, and I plan on doing so soon. I wanted to get some feed back on some content that does not necessarily need to be put in. Is this a good...