air force nomination essay

Hello all! This is my first post on here and I was hoping to get feedback on my nomination essay. The prompt is why do I want to attend a service academy. 500 words or less. When I was six, while my mother came to the United States and prepared for my arrival, I was under the care of my...

I´m very sure this has many punctuation mistakes, and sentences that sound weird that need to be rewritten. I have not taken it to my English teacher yet, and I plan on doing so soon. I wanted to get some feed back on some content that does not necessarily need to be put in. Is this a good...