summer seminar essay advice

I want some feedback on improving this: Born at the crossroads of cultures, I am an American citizen with a unique blend of heritage. My father is Korean, and my mother is Japanese. Therefore, I have always been surrounded by three cultures since I was born. I communicate with my mother in...

Hello and Happy New Year to all. DS is preparing his essays, and he and I were debating character counts. Essay 1 is 3000 characters max. Essay 2 is 1500 characters max. I'm turning to this knowledgeable and more experienced group to help us settle the debate - does character count include OR...

Here is my essay so far. I am applying for the Summer Seminar class for the summer of 2022. Any constructive criticism would be greatly appreciated. Do you have any personal life experiences where you have overcome adversity or challenges that have shaped you into the person you are today...

The question for my essay was: Do you have any personal life experiences where you have overcome adversity or challenges that have shaped you into the person you are today? I was mostly focused on creating a balance between my personal experience and leadership philosophy. I really wanted to...