I am currently in the process of applying the second time around, I have completed the SAT, TOEFL and CFA with above average results, and the U.S. Official interview. The things keeping me from submitting the final piece are the essays, which I may be overthinking. The problem is I may have focused last year on what the academy WANTS TO HEAR, however, I want to give it my own voice, from an international perspective. How exactly do I achieve that? Also, can anyone check my essays for stylistic or grammatical errors as I don't have someone to do that.