Candidate Writing Sample

Raptor Factor

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Is anyone willing to read my essay and give some feedback? I wasn't sure if it was supposed to read like a story (as personal statements for other colleges are supposed to). Thanks, Hayden
 
Is anyone willing to read my essay and give some feedback? I wasn't sure if it was supposed to read like a story (as personal statements for other colleges are supposed to). Thanks, Hayden

Send it my way. I was wondering that too. If you have a chance, would you be interested in looking at one of mine? I still need to edit it though.
 
I'm really good at proofreading, if you need any help with grammar, style, or spelling.
 
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