Essay check

[FØB Zero]

Hi, would anybody mind reading over and critiquing 1 nom essay of mine (<200 words) about my military career plan? PM me or make a comment here if willing to.

Thanks a ton

 

[lacebolla]

Hi, would anybody mind reading over and critiquing 1 nom essay of mine (<200 words) about my military career plan? PM me or make a comment here if willing to.

Thanks a ton

Hi! I'm a fellow candidate that just submitted all of my nomination essays, so I'd be happy to help

 

[Voyager3811]

I'm happy to read your essay if you want feedback !