Certainly all successful candidates have outstanding achievements. As far as excelling every step of the way, I don't think the academy would ask the essay question where the candidate must describe a major challenge or obstacle they have had to overcome if that were the case. My point is that good candidates excel even after they have experienced failure, and they push themselves even harder because of it.
Conquering an obstacle or some hardship does not necessarily imply previous failures or sub-standard performance. Certainly - it
can. Answering that question does not necessarily involve telling some story that involves previous failure or shortcoming on the part of the candidate
Besides, if I recall, the
actual question asked for the academy's online "personal statement" is:
How does attending the Naval Academy help you obtain your goals and what event in your life has helped shape your character?
That "event" does not
necessarily have to involve some "obstacle." In fact, it could very well be a huge
success story. Everybody loves a good rags-to-riches story, but I'm guessing there aren't a lot of "rags" in the stories of those who have a consistent history of success.
In fact, I recall a segment of the "personal statement" of one of my sons was something to the effect: I have learned by observing the misconduct and loose words of others; how a single incident can irreparably damage one's reputation and credibility. One's status as a leader does not end when they walk out of the classroom or off the baseball diamond. It is a never-ending responsibility that follows you everywhere you go and at all times. You cannot choose your moment to be a leader. [just paraphrasing - but it was something along those lines]
If one wants to tell a story of woe and how they overcame it - that's great!
I'm guessing the personal statements of the LOA recipients are not fraught with stories of how they have overcome their shortcomings.
Of course you do not have to "excel every step of the way." However, I don't see anything in the "personal statement" question that is speaking directly at any of a candidate's stumbles along the way. Again - I maintain, that there probably isn't a lot of stumbling amongst the super-qualified and LOA recipients.
I don't think everybody necessarily has a story about a character-shaping
failure in their life. It could just as easily be a character-shaping success or experience. I certainly don't think a candidate would be downgraded because of their lack of a previous character-shaping failure that they overcame. That would be just
one type of story. Perhaps a
good story. But not
everybody is going to have a story like that to tell.