Nomination Essay - Feedback

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BallerAR9223

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Hi everyone, I was just wondering if you could give me some feedback on my essay for my service academy nomination. Just to let you know I wrote this in an hour or less so it may not be very good grammar wise, but be as critical as you can possibly be.

Here is my essay below

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I would recommend asking people to review the essays on their own terms than posting it. Also no doubt we have honorable people however people like ideas and you just posted one they have no problem taking and rewriting. They could easily get it in before you which means you could be flagged for cheating when you didn't cheat.
 
Should've thought about that before posting, thanks for letting me know. Can I take it down?
 
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