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Hello there,
I applied to the Airforce and Naval Academy again for the class of 2027 and am currently a candidate again but I'm having a little trouble with this essay topic and need some examples or help in guiding me.

Essay Topic: DESCRIBE A CHALLENGE OR A HARDSHIP YOU HAVE OVERCOME AND HOW

Please Help me!!!
 
Hello there,
I applied to the Airforce and Naval Academy again for the class of 2027 and am currently a candidate again but I'm having a little trouble with this essay topic and need some examples or help in guiding me.

Essay Topic: DESCRIBE A CHALLENGE OR A HARDSHIP YOU HAVE OVERCOME AND HOW

Please Help me!!
We all have challanges or hardships that we manage, this essay question asks you to describe one that you managed. You need to describe how you managed it and what you learned from it. You may also describe how you will apply your learning in the future. You WILL face challenges while attending a SA and as an Officer...this is your opportunity to describe how your personal journey is progressing. Hardships can be a great topic to address. Hardships include: single parent households, having to work to contribute to the household finances, living in a different location, diversity issues, and many more. Use the skills you have learned in high school to outline and develop your essay. Get help from those that personally know you and your unique story.
 
They are trying to get at “what makes you tick”, as well. They can read your resume, but that doesn’t tell them ‘who you are’ as a person. And how you deal with this hardship. Other examples I think of are caring for a sick family member, or a disabled sibling, for example.

As mentioned, this is how you ‘show them’ who you are. The answer to this question is different for everyone. Take a while to think about it. And whatever you do, DON’T answer it from a perspective of what you think they want to read. Be honest and open.

As I recall, this prompt is an optional essay piece? My boys were very fortunate in that they didn’t have any significant hardship issues. But that doesn’t mean they didn’t deal with pressures, or have friends that did (that affected their own lives). IMO, never leave an opportunity to show who you are in your application. And in that spirit, they still addressed hardship in this optional piece. True, they weren’t experiencing significant hardships, but some people (them) are still affected by it, in some form. And they used this opportunity to show themselves under this subject matter.

You will also have an opportunity to discuss this part of ‘you’ in your BGO interview. Another significant part of the process where USNA ‘gets to know who you are and what makes you tick’.

Good luck. There is no right or wrong answer to your question, and use it to ‘show who you really are’. And make sure it’s well written! With proper grammar, and structured well.
 
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If this is your second time applying, what did you write about last time? Are you looking for new/different ideas or perhaps think what you wrote about last time wasn't the best choice?
 
It also said "challenge". For some people who don't necessarily experience hardship, they may have experienced character challenges in terms of honesty/integrity or some other character flaw that you struggle with and trying to overcome. Think of the recent college scandals of cheating. Maybe you're a great procrastinator.

Have some self-reflection and think of what you want to improve on or already overcame. That can be a great essay to write for this question.
 
One of the most effective essays I have seen, is where a successful USNA applicant wrote about failing as the Captain of his high school track team...he went on and described how he learned from that poor track year performance and his failures in leadership...and then described how he developed, delegated and implemented new training plans ... resulting in a very successful next season, including the mentoring of sub performing runners. Each applicant should tell their unique story...and it can include failure.
 
If this is your second time applying, what did you write about last time? Are you looking for new/different ideas or perhaps think what you wrote about last time wasn't the best choice?
To be honest I don't think I did this prompt last time and I am looking for new/different ideas for this time.
Thanks
 
I had a similar essay question and wrote about my pride leading to failure in my sport( in junior high) and how I adopted a new mentality of team and not self, was able to excel, and as a team captain( senior year) I can set an example of perseverance and know the value of humility.

Was it the answer they might’ve been hoping for - maybe not - but it was genuine
 
DS wrote about how his mentor needing mental healthcare, and how he, as the mentee struggled with the reversal in their roles.

As others mentioned, this is a chance to let the SA see inside the outer casing of 'you'.

Losing a close friend, losing someone to addiction, mental health crisis, moving to a new town/school, a beloved older sibling moving out and the household dichotomy changes. So many things to consider that might be a challenge to any individual.

How do you handle stress, the unknown, chaos, loss, or a new challenge? How do you handle failure, a poor grade, or a close friendship changing/ending?

I used to teach high school, I could go on for days about challenges facing teens in today's world.
 
DS wrote about how his mentor needing mental healthcare, and how he, as the mentee struggled with the reversal in their roles.
Past edit time, should read: "DS wrote about his mentor needing mental healthcare.......". I hate it when I re-read my posts and find mistakes. A prime example of why one should write their essays/statements and then sleep on it prior to submission. And read it multiple times, and out loud to someone else.
 
You have received a lot of insightful replies. The only addition I have -- and this advice was provided from a field force rep -- is unless you have a really compelling story, do not speak to a sports injury. Good luck to you.
 
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