Howdy again y’all,
I finally have 2 drafts I really like! I used all advice and now deciding between 2 essay themes to wrap the 3 points (which are pretty common unfortunately).
So if you were part of admissions ...
2. is different and I show ME, but I don’t want to seem crazy/joking .
Basically, since this is an application for THE military, I want to show that I am serious about this and my career plans, but I still want to reveal a unique side of myself and “one and only” approach. From your POV would incorporating a silly/humorous theme sound dumb or distracting? Or should I just take my chances and hope they take me seriously?
Thank you.
I finally have 2 drafts I really like! I used all advice and now deciding between 2 essay themes to wrap the 3 points (which are pretty common unfortunately).
1. One theme is heavily about my dad’s influence. (Appeals to ethos, pathos, etc. feels a bit like a pity party though.)
2. Next theme is about a an aspect of my heritage.
2. Next theme is about a an aspect of my heritage.
So if you were part of admissions ...
2. is different and I show ME, but I don’t want to seem crazy/joking .
Basically, since this is an application for THE military, I want to show that I am serious about this and my career plans, but I still want to reveal a unique side of myself and “one and only” approach. From your POV would incorporating a silly/humorous theme sound dumb or distracting? Or should I just take my chances and hope they take me seriously?
Thank you.
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