Hello! Merry Christmas everybody, I'm making use of my Christmas break by finalizing my NROTC application. I have been poking around threads here, seeing what everyone else writes and the commentary they receive and I figured I might as well share mine to get some feedback.
1. Discuss your reasons for wanting to become a Naval Officer. (Limit 2500 characters)
Growing up, I had never considered joining the Armed Forces, primarily because I was unsure what I wanted to do with my life. It was not until high school that I gave the Navy a thought. I was told of the Naval ROTC scholarship program, and was immediately enticed by its benefits. I realized that becoming a Naval Officer would allow me to serve the country I love while making a difference in the lives of others as well as my own.
The unofficial, although commonly accepted Navy motto is "Non sibi sed patriae", which is latin for “Not self but country.” This phrase alludes to the importance of putting your country and its people before yourself. It has always been a goal of mine to make as big of a difference as I can, and I believe a dutiful service in the Navy will allow me to do so. Naval Officers are coveted for their ability to help people selflessly, setting an example of excellence for which all others should aspire. I believe that selflessness is an honorable trait and one I wish to gain through service in the US Navy.
Naval Officers are commonly referred to as exemplars of good morals. Working diligently, honorably, and with unshaken resolve, Naval Officers will always give 100% on any task, regardless of the caliber. Naturally, I aspire to gain the respect commanded by members of the Navy, by adopting the traits that make them so desirable. By joining the Navy, I will not only adhere to the strict regimen put forth to all Officers, but I will also undergo challenges, both physical and mental, that will turn me into a much stronger person.
The primary reason for my desire to join the NROTC program is that it will give me an opportunity to do my duty to my country. My experience in education has made me appreciate the fundamental liberties given to all Americans. I feel it is my duty, like everyone else, to protect these privileges as well as aid those in need of aid. Simply put, United States Naval Officers are exemplars of honored duty and service to country. Helping to maintain peace, aiding war-torn countries, and helping to nurture those in need, the Navy is a beam of light in an increasingly darkening world, and I want nothing more than to be a part of it.
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1. Discuss your reasons for wanting to become a Naval Officer. (Limit 2500 characters)
Growing up, I had never considered joining the Armed Forces, primarily because I was unsure what I wanted to do with my life. It was not until high school that I gave the Navy a thought. I was told of the Naval ROTC scholarship program, and was immediately enticed by its benefits. I realized that becoming a Naval Officer would allow me to serve the country I love while making a difference in the lives of others as well as my own.
The unofficial, although commonly accepted Navy motto is "Non sibi sed patriae", which is latin for “Not self but country.” This phrase alludes to the importance of putting your country and its people before yourself. It has always been a goal of mine to make as big of a difference as I can, and I believe a dutiful service in the Navy will allow me to do so. Naval Officers are coveted for their ability to help people selflessly, setting an example of excellence for which all others should aspire. I believe that selflessness is an honorable trait and one I wish to gain through service in the US Navy.
Naval Officers are commonly referred to as exemplars of good morals. Working diligently, honorably, and with unshaken resolve, Naval Officers will always give 100% on any task, regardless of the caliber. Naturally, I aspire to gain the respect commanded by members of the Navy, by adopting the traits that make them so desirable. By joining the Navy, I will not only adhere to the strict regimen put forth to all Officers, but I will also undergo challenges, both physical and mental, that will turn me into a much stronger person.
The primary reason for my desire to join the NROTC program is that it will give me an opportunity to do my duty to my country. My experience in education has made me appreciate the fundamental liberties given to all Americans. I feel it is my duty, like everyone else, to protect these privileges as well as aid those in need of aid. Simply put, United States Naval Officers are exemplars of honored duty and service to country. Helping to maintain peace, aiding war-torn countries, and helping to nurture those in need, the Navy is a beam of light in an increasingly darkening world, and I want nothing more than to be a part of it.
Character count: 2219 (including spaces)