Why I want to be an Officer Essay

[dddad]

Thank you all for your help. I'll go back to the drawing board. I'll try to keep updating this thread. Everyone has been a great help!

Generalized updates on progress make sense, but please don't keep asking the forum to read your next draft. You'll know when it is done. And, if you don't, ask an English or History teacher at your high school to take a look at it - preferably someone who knows you well. Getting an English teacher invested in your efforts early on probably won't hurt you when it comes time to ask them to "evaluate" or provide a recommendation (for a MOC). Good luck.