Here is what I wrote (I am open to any criticisms or advice. Tell me what you think):
I wish to attend a service academy as an opportunity to serve my country as an army officer to the best of my ability. Joining the military has long been a goal of mine, and I aspire to join a service academy...
Thank you for the advice.
I revised my original.
Here is what I have now. I tried to take a personal route and avoid talking so much about what West Point has to offer.:
I wish to pursue an education at a service academy because it would provide me with an opportunity to serve my country...
Hello, I am writing a 300 word essay on why do I wish to attend a service academy.
Here is what I have (Give me any critiques or advice I'm open to anything):
I wish to pursue an education at a service academy because it would provide me with an opportunity to serve my country and study my...