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    Personal Statement for USNA

    Hello, I am an applicant to USAFA and USNA. I think I have finished my USNA personal statement and wanted some feedback on it. I know it's good to have family and friends read essays because they'll know if it sounds like you or not. I've already had everyone I know read it, but I'd like...
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    USNA Personal Statement

    I have been working on the personal statement for my application for some time now. I think I have finally written something that sounds like me and that will tell the admissions what kind of person I am. Still, I would really appreciate some feedback on what I have written. Of course, I have...
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    Personal Statement Help

    I know there are several threads dealing with this topic, but they only deal with a single poster (from what I read) and was hoping I could receive some help for both editing and to see if I'm on the right track. Here's my statement, 497 words. From the early age of eight years old, naval war...
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    Personal Statement Help

    Hello everyone! This is my first post here and I am looking for some help. I am currently in the process of completing my application for the class of 2022 and I am looking for some help on the personal statement portion. Can someone tell me how important this portion is as well? Below is the...