personal statement

Hey guys, I just submitted my application last night and after I submitted it I noticed my personal statement was one that I previously wrote rather than an updated one I wrote a few days ago. I don't know whether or not it was my error or caused by a glitch in the application portal (though...

Hi there! I am a prospective candidate for USNA Class of '25. I have begun to write my personal statement but I'm very stumped on how to answer the second part of the personal statement which is as follows... (2) Describe a personal experience you have had which you feel has contributed to your...

Hello, I am an applicant to USAFA and USNA. I think I have finished my USNA personal statement and wanted some feedback on it. I know it's good to have family and friends read essays because they'll know if it sounds like you or not. I've already had everyone I know read it, but I'd like...

I have been working on the personal statement for my application for some time now. I think I have finally written something that sounds like me and that will tell the admissions what kind of person I am. Still, I would really appreciate some feedback on what I have written. Of course, I have...

I know there are several threads dealing with this topic, but they only deal with a single poster (from what I read) and was hoping I could receive some help for both editing and to see if I'm on the right track. Here's my statement, 497 words. From the early age of eight years old, naval war...

Hello everyone! This is my first post here and I am looking for some help. I am currently in the process of completing my application for the class of 2022 and I am looking for some help on the personal statement portion. Can someone tell me how important this portion is as well? Below is the...