AROTC Essay Tips

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guydelarosa

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After posting my NROTC essay on here a couple months ago and receiving so pretty useful tips from user, I was lucky enjoy to be awarded a 4 year scholarship. After doing over 20 supplement for HYPSM and other T20 schools I realized that the essay I submitted for NROTC was horribly average at best (and that's a huge stretch). I think that the process of writing so many college applications has ultimately made me a better writer.

Now that I'm applying for the AROTC scholarship, I was hoping someone could take a look at it. I do think it is much better than what I wrote 3 months ago, but I struggle with insecurity over my writing. If any user would be willing to help, I'll PM the essay over.

Look forward to hearing your advice!!
 
Hey I'd be happy to look at your essay. I assume you are already above average as I've seen you on other threads talking about applying to Yale. Maybe make a Google Document and I'll PM you my email to share it with.
 
JBfortunecookie1 said:
Hey I'd be happy to look at your essay. I assume you are already above average as I've seen you on other threads talking about applying to Yale. Maybe make a Google Document and I'll PM you my email to share it with.
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Thanks for your willingness to help! I wouldn't call my self above average, maybe just overly ambitious. :) Anyways, just PM your email andI'll one it to ya!
 
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