guydelarosa
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I found that some user where extremely helpful when I was doing my NROTC essay. Thankfully, the advice worked and my tier 2 scholarship was placed at Harvard (Deferred ) back in early December. After going back and reading my NROTC essays, I found that they where pretty awful compared to what I wrote for my college supplements. I'm actually quite surprised and fell very lucky to have been fortunate enough to receive my scholarship so early with my essays being below average.
Regardless, I'm hoping some of you guys could help me, again, with the AROTC essay. I fully understand that nothing is for certain and a successful NROTC application does not mean the same will happen for AROTC, so I'm really trying to put my best package forth for the boards.
I would prefer that parents or adult involved with this forum take a look (obviously for privacy and plagiarism concerns), but I would appreciate feedback from anyone. Let me know if you want to take a look, and I'll PM the essay over.
I appreciate your guy's help and look forward to hearing your suggestions!
Regardless, I'm hoping some of you guys could help me, again, with the AROTC essay. I fully understand that nothing is for certain and a successful NROTC application does not mean the same will happen for AROTC, so I'm really trying to put my best package forth for the boards.
I would prefer that parents or adult involved with this forum take a look (obviously for privacy and plagiarism concerns), but I would appreciate feedback from anyone. Let me know if you want to take a look, and I'll PM the essay over.
I appreciate your guy's help and look forward to hearing your suggestions!