Hi all, I'm currently a high school junior and I decided to get an early start on my nomination essay for next year. I know it's actually very early, but I felt that the earlier, the better. NOTE: the essay is currently 514 words, if there is anything that you guys recommend to remove or simplify please let me know. Thanks!
Personal Statement
Despite coming from a nonreligious family, I strongly believe that my purpose is to help others in need. As a first generation American, my sister and I are the first in our family to fully experience the level of hospitality that this country has graciously given to us from birth. My immigrant parents were welcomed with open arms, and although they didn’t have much, with the help of this great country, they raised my sister and I to the best of their abilities; without the help of the United States, I would not be here today.
Growing up, I was always taught to be grateful and appreciate everything I had, and to help everyone that I could. I believe that the Naval Academy can help me achieve my goals of being a leader and giving back to not only the country that helped raise me, but to every country in need, continuously striving to be the best person that I can be, and making a positive impact on the world. For this reason I chose the United States Service Academies over traditional universities, and the Naval Academy in particular. Every year natural disasters strike across the globe, and every year the US Navy is first on the scene to render aid. From Haiti to Japan to our very own Texas, Navy officers and sailors are the first to action, upholding the Academy’s morals of duty, honor, and loyalty. As someone whose existence revolves around service to others, the Naval Academy’s mission to develop leaders to serve the nation stands out to me. Having been taught and motivated by excellent leaders in the community, it is only natural for that to be paid forward, and for me to become a teacher and motivator myself, not just in the community, but for the servicemen and women that I will have the honor of leading in the future as well.
During my visit to USNA a few years prior, I felt an instant connection to the campus, its traditions of service, and the morals that its graduates uphold. To walk the same halls as American legends such as William “Bull” Halsey and Chester Nimitz, among many others, was an indescribable feeling, and I strive to have the same impact on the world as they did. In my lifetime, I have had the chance to experience many different cultures and meet countless wonderful people, and I wish to continue that moving forward. I believe that the Naval Academy will grant me an opportunity to do just that, an opportunity that the other service academies could not offer to the same extent.
I am prepared to serve the nation in any capacity; however, given my dedication to putting others first, I feel that I would be best suited to Naval Aviation. As a Naval Aviator, defending the fleet and the thousands of lives that operate and maintain it is a top priority. This tremendous responsibility is not something to be taken lightly, however, I firmly believe that the United States Naval Academy will prepare me well for the task.
Also, I feel that I need to mention what I can bring to the table, but I'm not sure how to integrate it. Any help/tips are appreciated!
Personal Statement
Despite coming from a nonreligious family, I strongly believe that my purpose is to help others in need. As a first generation American, my sister and I are the first in our family to fully experience the level of hospitality that this country has graciously given to us from birth. My immigrant parents were welcomed with open arms, and although they didn’t have much, with the help of this great country, they raised my sister and I to the best of their abilities; without the help of the United States, I would not be here today.
Growing up, I was always taught to be grateful and appreciate everything I had, and to help everyone that I could. I believe that the Naval Academy can help me achieve my goals of being a leader and giving back to not only the country that helped raise me, but to every country in need, continuously striving to be the best person that I can be, and making a positive impact on the world. For this reason I chose the United States Service Academies over traditional universities, and the Naval Academy in particular. Every year natural disasters strike across the globe, and every year the US Navy is first on the scene to render aid. From Haiti to Japan to our very own Texas, Navy officers and sailors are the first to action, upholding the Academy’s morals of duty, honor, and loyalty. As someone whose existence revolves around service to others, the Naval Academy’s mission to develop leaders to serve the nation stands out to me. Having been taught and motivated by excellent leaders in the community, it is only natural for that to be paid forward, and for me to become a teacher and motivator myself, not just in the community, but for the servicemen and women that I will have the honor of leading in the future as well.
During my visit to USNA a few years prior, I felt an instant connection to the campus, its traditions of service, and the morals that its graduates uphold. To walk the same halls as American legends such as William “Bull” Halsey and Chester Nimitz, among many others, was an indescribable feeling, and I strive to have the same impact on the world as they did. In my lifetime, I have had the chance to experience many different cultures and meet countless wonderful people, and I wish to continue that moving forward. I believe that the Naval Academy will grant me an opportunity to do just that, an opportunity that the other service academies could not offer to the same extent.
I am prepared to serve the nation in any capacity; however, given my dedication to putting others first, I feel that I would be best suited to Naval Aviation. As a Naval Aviator, defending the fleet and the thousands of lives that operate and maintain it is a top priority. This tremendous responsibility is not something to be taken lightly, however, I firmly believe that the United States Naval Academy will prepare me well for the task.
Also, I feel that I need to mention what I can bring to the table, but I'm not sure how to integrate it. Any help/tips are appreciated!