Hello all, I've finished a very rough draft of my essay. It's the last part of my application that I need to submit, and I hope to submit it in a few days. (Quick question- is this still considered "early" to complete an application on the grand scale of all the applicants?) I think that the second paragraph may need the most help, and I need assistance with a concluding statement. Thank you all in advance for your help! Go Navy! Beat Army!