Alexis Hemeon
5-Year Member
- Joined
- Jan 2, 2013
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I'm almost done with my NROTC application, except that I need to write my two essays. I have outlined ideas, but I need advice on which ideas are good and which ones to throw out. Thank you in advance!
Discuss your reasons for wanting to become a Naval Nurse Officer. (Limit 2500 characters)
Ideas:
-To take care of the sick and wounded:
--Military personnel (Navy and Marines) and their families
--Humanitarian relief efforts
--Participate in outreach programs
-To have people in my charge whom I can ensure will do the same (see above)
-To have the opportunity to be either on a ship or stationed anywhere in the world
-To serve in something bigger than myself
-Cousin enlisted, neighbor an officer in reserves, grandfather WWII vet, great uncle
-Something less than 1% of people do
-To not only gain world-class experience, but to make a positive contribution
-I love health care (nutrition, anatomy, etc.)
-Nursing has many options and specialties
-To challenge myself and step out of my comfort zone
How might your background and experiences enhance the U.S. Naval Service? (Recommended, Limit 2500 characters)
Ideas:
-Determined to be in the Navy (if not NROTC, then the Nurse Candidate Program)
-Volunteering experience plays well with Nursing (helping people)
-Find leadership, motivation, judgment, initiative, integrity, etc. examples
--Work: determined to dishwash and work on the line despite gender
---Trained multiple employees
---Held 4 year job during school with no hiatus
---In charge of an entire market, opening and closing
--Physical: yoga, taekwondo, swimming, biking
---Physically trained with the marines (guest at Initial Strength Test)
---Physically demanding job, other people quit during service
---(Synchronized swimming and gymnastics?)
--Other: Changed what was in the school vending machines
---Warmed up school chorus on the piano in place of teacher
---Taken charge in group situations
---Maintain equality in school yearbook
---Organized communications for Youth Group and School announcements
---Robotics treasurer (manage money and set up fundraisers)
---Tutoring a freshman in Spanish
--Home: Father is blue collar (blue collar values)
---Mother is white collar (white collar values)
---Went to Guatemala when 16 by myself
---Brought up with a world view (Berta), so prepared, bilingual
---Instilled with compassion to benefit the Nurse Corps
---Translated for people in Ecuador and Dominican Republic
Discuss your reasons for wanting to become a Naval Nurse Officer. (Limit 2500 characters)
Ideas:
-To take care of the sick and wounded:
--Military personnel (Navy and Marines) and their families
--Humanitarian relief efforts
--Participate in outreach programs
-To have people in my charge whom I can ensure will do the same (see above)
-To have the opportunity to be either on a ship or stationed anywhere in the world
-To serve in something bigger than myself
-Cousin enlisted, neighbor an officer in reserves, grandfather WWII vet, great uncle
-Something less than 1% of people do
-To not only gain world-class experience, but to make a positive contribution
-I love health care (nutrition, anatomy, etc.)
-Nursing has many options and specialties
-To challenge myself and step out of my comfort zone
How might your background and experiences enhance the U.S. Naval Service? (Recommended, Limit 2500 characters)
Ideas:
-Determined to be in the Navy (if not NROTC, then the Nurse Candidate Program)
-Volunteering experience plays well with Nursing (helping people)
-Find leadership, motivation, judgment, initiative, integrity, etc. examples
--Work: determined to dishwash and work on the line despite gender
---Trained multiple employees
---Held 4 year job during school with no hiatus
---In charge of an entire market, opening and closing
--Physical: yoga, taekwondo, swimming, biking
---Physically trained with the marines (guest at Initial Strength Test)
---Physically demanding job, other people quit during service
---(Synchronized swimming and gymnastics?)
--Other: Changed what was in the school vending machines
---Warmed up school chorus on the piano in place of teacher
---Taken charge in group situations
---Maintain equality in school yearbook
---Organized communications for Youth Group and School announcements
---Robotics treasurer (manage money and set up fundraisers)
---Tutoring a freshman in Spanish
--Home: Father is blue collar (blue collar values)
---Mother is white collar (white collar values)
---Went to Guatemala when 16 by myself
---Brought up with a world view (Berta), so prepared, bilingual
---Instilled with compassion to benefit the Nurse Corps
---Translated for people in Ecuador and Dominican Republic