Writing Feedback?

[lacebolla]

Hello everyone. I've pretty much finished everything up on my application, with my CFA, Interview, and writing samples still having to be completed. I've got a pretty solid outline of all three of my samples, and was wondering if anyone could critique my ideas? I would ask my college counselor, but she's busy at the moment, and I feel like someone who has history with the military could give me a stronger insight. If you could, I'd appreciate a PM. Thank y'all so much!

 

[FlyFalcon]

Fellow candidate, and military Brat. So I can give those kinds of critiques. Also I recommend asking her even if she is busy so when she does get the chance she'll be able to do it.

I'm assuming you're in college since you said college counselor? If you're in high school and you mean asking you r usafa counselor I would recommend against sending them the essay and going to your English teacher instead.

 

[lacebolla]

Fellow candidate, and military Brat. So I can give those kinds of critiques. Also I recommend asking her even if she is busy so when she does get the chance she'll be able to do it.

I'm assuming you're in college since you said college counselor? If you're in high school and you mean asking you r usafa counselor I would recommend against sending them the essay and going to your English teacher instead.

Sorry, I'm in high school at the moment. They're called college counselors. I have emailed her, since I've already applied to 6 schools with her help (including essays), she needs to direct her time to other kids applying, which I completely understand.

I haven't asked my USAFA counselor yet. I have asked my English teacher, but she's yet to reply to me (I sent her an email asking for her help a week ago, and I haven't gotten a reply, so I'll send a follow-up). Thank you so much for your help!