mav1971kit
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Hi,
Mind if I can have some critiques on this essay for the NROTC scholarship? This was the essay I used last year, but I'm not exactly sure on how to improve it. If worst comes to worst, I'm completely prepared to scrap this one in favor of another version of this essay, which I'm currently working on.
Also, on a slightly unrelated note, I want to apply for the scholarship as early as possible, but I'm afraid that I won't be able to get in contact with my teachers for their recommendations until late August/Early September. After I get those in, how long will it take until interviews are scheduled? I really want to be in by the first few review board meetings.
Discuss your reasons for wanting to become a Naval Officer. Specifically comment on leadership positions you've held, the challenges you have faced and the lessons you have learned.
(2500 characters/400 Words)
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Mind if I can have some critiques on this essay for the NROTC scholarship? This was the essay I used last year, but I'm not exactly sure on how to improve it. If worst comes to worst, I'm completely prepared to scrap this one in favor of another version of this essay, which I'm currently working on.
Also, on a slightly unrelated note, I want to apply for the scholarship as early as possible, but I'm afraid that I won't be able to get in contact with my teachers for their recommendations until late August/Early September. After I get those in, how long will it take until interviews are scheduled? I really want to be in by the first few review board meetings.
Discuss your reasons for wanting to become a Naval Officer. Specifically comment on leadership positions you've held, the challenges you have faced and the lessons you have learned.
(2500 characters/400 Words)
**Deletion requested**
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