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Hello, I am looking for some pointers for my essay. The prompt was why do you want to be an officer? Can you please give me some advice? The United States makes a great deal to show that everyone has the right to live the life they want. This means that people’s rights are at the heart of...

Hello, I am applying for a congressional nomination, and they ask me for an essay of 300 words on a challenge I have faced. I was wondering just how current the challenge needs to be. The biggest thing that happened to me was when I was in 2nd grade. For the short story, my parents had me...

Thank you all for your help. I'll go back to the drawing board. I'll try to keep updating this thread. Everyone has been a great help!

I thought about that but I feel like 500 words is not enough for that, could you please be more precise?

I am a Junior in Highschool. The application starts this march.

Hello, I am working on an Essay for my Congresswoman (Elise Stefanik, 21st district of NYS). The prompt is to write a 500-word essay describing your reasons for wanting to serve as an officer in the United States military. Here is what I have so far, could someone give me pointers and a little...