justin_112
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Hello,
I am working on an Essay for my Congresswoman (Elise Stefanik, 21st district of NYS). The prompt is to write a 500-word essay describing your reasons for wanting to serve as an officer in the United States military. Here is what I have so far, could someone give me pointers and a little guidance? Thank you.
As an American, I always hear about the brave men and women who have valiantly severed our nation. These people inspire me and push me to pursue a military career, more specifically as an officer. First and foremost, the reason I want to be an officer is to achieve one of the highest echelons of serving my nation. I want to be an officer because it gives me the opportunity to actively participate in the protection of what is most dear to me. Justice, Freedom, and Democracy are the most important ideals to me, and I believe that they need protection in times of both peace and war. Being an officer will allow me to do that. I see being an officer as the greatest way of serving one’s country. America is truly the greatest nation on Earth, and I see it as my duty to protect it, its ideals, and its people. Everyone ends up serving their nation in a way, but not everyone can actively see the change they make. As an officer, I will be at the heart of the change, and I will create a better world, for all Americans and all other nations. I have a need to help others, and this position would allow me to do exactly that. Not only do I have an innate need to change the world, but I desire to be a leader in that change. I have strong leadership qualities that would absolutely fit the role of an officer. Leading is a very natural skill for me, and the opportunity to make it my occupation, and on top of that, leading for something I believe in, would simply be the culmination of what I have worked on for my whole life. I strongly believe that I am made for this. No group of people can stand without a strong leader, and I intend to be the best leader I can be, to devote my whole being to my calling, and to only rest when I know that the job is done and has been completed properly. Changing the world is what I set out to do, and being an officer will allow me to carry America, wherever it desires to be, and allow it, and myself to change the world. To be part of the greatest military force the world has ever seen is, and to lead the brave men and women who are part of it would be the greatest honor anyone could bestow on me. However, to me, leading would not be ordering soldiers and giving orders just to exude my power, but I would be amidst them, working as a team, all with a part to do, to lift us all up as a team. I am confident that I will be a critical asset to the United States Armed Forces, and it would be an honor to be called an officer, to serve among the troops, and to defend what I love the most.
I am working on an Essay for my Congresswoman (Elise Stefanik, 21st district of NYS). The prompt is to write a 500-word essay describing your reasons for wanting to serve as an officer in the United States military. Here is what I have so far, could someone give me pointers and a little guidance? Thank you.
As an American, I always hear about the brave men and women who have valiantly severed our nation. These people inspire me and push me to pursue a military career, more specifically as an officer. First and foremost, the reason I want to be an officer is to achieve one of the highest echelons of serving my nation. I want to be an officer because it gives me the opportunity to actively participate in the protection of what is most dear to me. Justice, Freedom, and Democracy are the most important ideals to me, and I believe that they need protection in times of both peace and war. Being an officer will allow me to do that. I see being an officer as the greatest way of serving one’s country. America is truly the greatest nation on Earth, and I see it as my duty to protect it, its ideals, and its people. Everyone ends up serving their nation in a way, but not everyone can actively see the change they make. As an officer, I will be at the heart of the change, and I will create a better world, for all Americans and all other nations. I have a need to help others, and this position would allow me to do exactly that. Not only do I have an innate need to change the world, but I desire to be a leader in that change. I have strong leadership qualities that would absolutely fit the role of an officer. Leading is a very natural skill for me, and the opportunity to make it my occupation, and on top of that, leading for something I believe in, would simply be the culmination of what I have worked on for my whole life. I strongly believe that I am made for this. No group of people can stand without a strong leader, and I intend to be the best leader I can be, to devote my whole being to my calling, and to only rest when I know that the job is done and has been completed properly. Changing the world is what I set out to do, and being an officer will allow me to carry America, wherever it desires to be, and allow it, and myself to change the world. To be part of the greatest military force the world has ever seen is, and to lead the brave men and women who are part of it would be the greatest honor anyone could bestow on me. However, to me, leading would not be ordering soldiers and giving orders just to exude my power, but I would be amidst them, working as a team, all with a part to do, to lift us all up as a team. I am confident that I will be a critical asset to the United States Armed Forces, and it would be an honor to be called an officer, to serve among the troops, and to defend what I love the most.