Listen, I did much worse in a number of areas and still passed. It’s possible your mile time will be too far out, I don’t know, but I’d say given you’re meeting most averages, and exceeding a few, you’re probably ok. Everyone stresses out a lot about this, it IS part of the application, but I think people tend to assume the standards are higher than they really are. Maybe that was just me, who’s to say. You definitely should try your absolute best regardless. If you want to improve your mile time, I’d recommend mixing interval training with longer runs.
I don’t know how you’re working to improve right now, but simply getting out and making your goal to run faster for longer a couple times a week, plus some longer slower runs will make a big difference. I didn’t have access to a track while I was training, but if you do you can split intervals that way, and if you don’t get out and measure some distances and try to maintain a fast pace (right now that might look like 8’30”, try to aim for difficult but doable over extended periods of time) for as long as possible, and try to increase that distance consistently. Also, how’s your breathing? Learning to breathe correctly can really help running feel less awful. There are plenty of videos on YouTube and online articles if you go looking for them. That’s not too much information, but I hope that helps!
