Different type of problems

Orphan46

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Hi everyone! I’m 16, a junior, planning to start my application to the USNA in May. I’ve gone through the USNA site and looked through the posts here for the USNA going back to the beginning in 2006. Lots of interesting stuff, and the evolution of the requirements and worries (along with a lot that stays the same throughout) make it a very interesting read. I know you guys can’t give me an percentage rating of my chances, and really, I’m not looking for that.

However, I have a relatively unusual background, with some deficits compared to the average applicant, and I’m hoping that someone here might have experience with some of the same things, and give me some ideas on how to present everything in the best light to maximize my chances of making it through.

On the negative side, I’ve been in the foster system in Los Angeles since before my second birthday, and have been in 38 foster homes and 31 schools, including 6 high schools so far. Despite the stereotype, I’ve never had behavioral problems, and have an evaluation from a psychologist at Social Services stating that I don’t have any problems in spite of the number of times I’ve been moved around, and that I’m able to handle stress well.

Because of the frequent changes in homes and schools, I’ve never been in clubs or sports. I have participated in martial arts when possible and have black belts in Hapkido and Aikido. I’ve been working after school and weekends for the last few years, and have also tried hard to contribute to the foster homes I’ve been in, helping with chores, watching younger kids, tutoring other kids in academics, and so forth. I have some of these efforts documented in a journal.

On the plus side, I have a 4.0 GPA going back to first grade, and have taken the most advanced classes available. I got a 1520 on the practice PSAT last year, and a 1600 on the SAT last May, and have taken a bunch of AP tests so far, all with a score of 5, including Calculus BC, Biology, Chemistry, Physics C, Spanish and Spanish Lit. I took a practice CFA last month and maxed all the sections. I started studying on my own in third grade, to make sure that I could stay current even with changing schools mid-year, and have made lots of progress. I speak a number of languages, since my foster families had people from many different national and ethnic groups.

The congressional district I’m in at the moment had seven or less candidates on their nomination slate the last three years, so it might be a better chance than many, although I’m aware that any given year might be better or worse. My parents were both half Native American. I don’t know if that’s one of the diversity targets for the academy.

So, I have letters of recommendation from my Social Services case worker documenting my good behavior in school and contributions in the homes I’ve been in, and from the psychologist, stating that he doesn’t believe I’d have any problem fitting in.

The foster home I’m in now is several miles from the high school and our foster mom takes care of eight kids, so rides to and from school aren’t practical. I have work after school, so I have to take the bus home and am not able to stay and participate in sports or clubs. I’ve talked with coaches about running track or cross-country, and their attitude was that if I couldn’t put in at least two hours a day, six days a week, I shouldn’t bother.

I took the AMC10 last year, and scored a 15, but was moved to another school before the scores came back, and I wasn’t able to take the AIME. If I can do as well next year, I might be able to do well on the AIME and then in the US Math Olympiad or even the International Math Olympiad. I’ve never seen the AMC tests mentioned in this forum though, and am wondering what kind of weight they’d give. I’m taking a few more AP tests in May too.

I’m aware that foster kids have a sometimes deserved reputation for emotional problems, but I believe I can document my stability. Balancing a good CFA and martial arts against a lack of sports, and good scores and GPA despite lots of schools, is there anything I should be working on besides becoming the captain of the football team?
 
First I want to say, congrats. All my volunteer work is with foster children and I know the system well. Honestly, your application is going to stand out. Keep at it. You are doing all things possible. This is where your essays and BGO come into play to help tell your story. There is an essay where you get to talk about adversity. I think the things you have accomplished will stand out just fine. Good luck.
 
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Yours is an unusual profile, and as Hoops said above, it stands out....in a good way.

Agree that your essay needs to convey your unique journey and the obstacles you have overcome. Looking at the way you write, I don't think you will have a problem.

Best of luck to you.
 
When I did campus security I had a young woman who was on her 51st placement when I met her. Before she graduated she was at 56. She did struggle and had law enforcement interactions and behavioral and mental health challenges. You have a great outlook and clearly have applied yourself and found ways to make your situation work. Kudos to you and I wish you the best in this process.
 
Based on what you have mentioned, you have a story to tell and I am sure you will do a great job and shine at your Interview with BGO and in essay.

You have maxed SAT (1600) , 4.0 GPA, CFA ( max)..

Good luck.. [emoji106]
 
@Orphan46

Be yourself, tell your story. You have grit, adaptiveness, focus, brains and self-awareness to bring to the table. Assets, all. There aren’t many with your unique story. You have proven you can excel in challenging circumstances.

The Navy and Marine Corps, and USNA, is a family which will welcome you with open arms and become your shipmates and family, with friends for life made along the way. Let us hope that door opens for you.

Keep us posted on how this goes for you, and how we can help with questions or worries.
 
Wow! You are an amazing person and applicant overall. I am also a black belt in Hapkido!
 
Holy cow what a profile.

My only thought would be to use judgement and balance in the evidence you use to present yourself as well adjusted. To me the strongest evidence of that is your GPA, SAT, and extra circulars, which are off the chart. You mention the idea that foster kids have a bad reputation for behavior and problems in school, and trying to counter that with LORs from Social Workers and Physiologists. I think this is a fine idea, but be careful going overboard and drawing too much attention to it.

Your grades, background, and ECs put you in the 99th percentile. There isn't a shred of evidence to suggest that you've had any problems as a result of your life being shaken up every few months. If you had a weak profile, or a semester or two of bad grades, I could see how the LOR from a Social worker might help, but I think if you aren't careful, it looks like you're trying to attack a problem that isn't there.

With that said, you should highlight your story... as being able to overcome that level of adversity demonstrates that you should be able to handle the rigors of the academy of your choice. Admissions is looking for a well rounded class that represents a wide range of backgrounds.

Good luck dude!
 
Thanks, everyone, for the words of encouragement. I was primarily concerned with whether I'd need to overcome the stereotypes associated with being a foster kid. I've encountered those at school as well as county services, and was worried my app might be shuffled aside just because of that.

I'm already working on the essay, there's another recent topic specifically on the essay that gave me some pointers, and my first quick draft went over 1,500 words. I figure to polish that down to 499 by the time the application opens.

I’m also working on picking teachers for the letters of recommendation, and hope to get those done by the end of the school year. I'm taking math from the local community college - can I use the professor there as my math teacher? I haven't had math classes with any of the teachers at my current high school.
 
Claim it, you got this. Our country is very blessed that you are considering serving. Many prayers coming your way. God Bless you!
 
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