#essay questions

Hey I would really love some constructive criticism on my essay. I don't know if i should add more about my challenges or not. I really want to go to the USAFA Summer Seminar to see if USAFA is the right fit for me or not, im on the edge. Please discuss any personal life experience where you...

Good evening. I am interested in gaining a learning experience in the USAFA Summer Seminar program and have finished all the parts in my application- except the last question on my essay writing part. Here is what I have for both essays. Please let me know how I could improve those essays...