I always wonder why someone would resubmit the same essay if they are reapplying?
I guess I see it as you may think it was outstanding, but they may not have taken the same view.
~ Caveat, for an SA appointment it is a WCS, and something else could have been the ding.
However, when you say it is the best in your opinion, it still makes me ask what did your ALO say? Did you even show it to them? Did they say OMG it is outstanding? Or did they say it is strong?
I wouldn't call/email admissions regarding this question. I would call/email my ALO and ask them to read it. They have the experience. The word Liasion exists for the reason that they are the ones between you and the AFA.
~ Yes, some ALOs are minimally involved, but I would think as a reapplicant they will give you the time of the day.
~~ If not you could pm posters like Christcorp, Flieger, heck I believe Member is an USMA ALO equivalent, or maybe it is MedB (can't recall), and there also a USNA XYZ poster that is a BGO (too many USNA with a year behind it to remember which one is).
The point is there are posters here that are AFA ALO equivalents and maybe willing to give a quick look for a poster. Yes, you are saying in your essay why the AFA, but I believe that if it is written properly they can insert their branch and get the same feeling.
I will still hold one posters essay (USNA) as the best I read EVER! It had no mention of the following:
~ All my life since I can remember, I wanted to be an officer...
~ The SA will give me the best opportunity...
~ I can bring...
Instead, this is what I read it as:
It was a story about how they ran track, and enduring the pain of the run. As a runner they have time to think and they thought about as a long distance runner they would have to make it through the pain and push on instead of quitting. Their goal will not be easy. How during that run enduring cramping and not in first place they pushed on to never stop, be it first place or finishing, because they made that commitment to their school and their team.
I wanted to meet this kid and say WoW you are the epitome of what is great about our future!
Just saying, think about it....that may be your competition. Your opinion is important, but did it stick with others as the best?
~FWIW, DS had to write an essay about anyone living or dead and one question you could ask them. As a proud Momma, I thought he had the best essay ever before I read that one.
~~ His essay was asking Truman, knowing the deaths of dropping the first bomb, how did you come to terms with dropping the second on Japan? It was thought provoking, but still I walked away with the other thinking they know how to push through the pain, and if I have to put odds down on one of the two...my DS wouldn't be the one! That is a proud Mom of an 02 C130J pilot!