Hello again folks,
I have a question about the “why you want to go” essay. I am conflicted, because I have a lot to write (several reasons) to fit in so little space. I know many others struggle with this too, but would it be better to focus on one central reason? or several reasons all together?
First of all I have the reasons of visiting the academy, falling in love with it. I love the structure, people, and want to serve my country. Etc etc.
Second deep rooted reason, is because my dad immigrated to America. He has passed away, but I saw hard he worked for me and my sister. I want to make up for all his work and opportunities the country has provided us to get us where we are.
From an admission stand point, what kind of essay is more likely to stand out to you? Would you prefer a “quantity of reasons” or “one unique reason”?
I have a question about the “why you want to go” essay. I am conflicted, because I have a lot to write (several reasons) to fit in so little space. I know many others struggle with this too, but would it be better to focus on one central reason? or several reasons all together?
First of all I have the reasons of visiting the academy, falling in love with it. I love the structure, people, and want to serve my country. Etc etc.
Second deep rooted reason, is because my dad immigrated to America. He has passed away, but I saw hard he worked for me and my sister. I want to make up for all his work and opportunities the country has provided us to get us where we are.
From an admission stand point, what kind of essay is more likely to stand out to you? Would you prefer a “quantity of reasons” or “one unique reason”?