Hi. I just wanted to show you guys my resume and hopefully get feedback and criticisms regarding it. I was hoping to format it so that the academy doesn't have to assume what responsibilities or activities I've done in the position I point out in my resume. I would be very grateful if you guys could review it and offer any advise. Thanks.
Civic Involvement:
• Assistant Basketball Coach (9th grade - 2007)
o Coached in the Pee Wee division at Chatsworth Park, Chatsworth, Ca
o Responsible for, but not limited to, assisting head coach in teaching children the fundamental concepts of basketball as well as instilling hard work and competition in their character.
o In charge of the logistics and organization of equipment and schedules for practice and games.
• Assistant Systems Administrator (9th, 10th, 12th)
o Active Student computer technician since 2006 at Lawrence Middle School
o Primarily responsible for assisting the systems administrator in troubleshooting network and computer problems.
o Helped maintain the functionality of the school’s Local Access Network.
o Also identified and audited the network security of the school.
o Given the responsibility in educating teachers and staff of network security in a weekend seminar with the purpose of preventing future exploits. (2007)
• Alter Server (9th, 10th, 11th, 12th)
o Active Alter Server since 2005 at St. Joseph the Worker.
o Responsibilities include assisting and preparing in setting up mass, as well as cleaning up after.
o Primarily responsible for assisting priest during mass and carrying out assigned duties by Senior Alter Server.
• League Deputy Commissioner (11th, 12th)
o League Deputy Commissioner for Chase Basketball League.
o Responsibilities include but not limited to assisting the commissioner in planning and organizing the bi-annual basketball league.
o Also responsible in preparing the league schedules, ordering uniforms, collecting team fees, and etc
• Church Youth Minister (10th, 11th, 12th)
o Responsible for assisting in Youth Masses as either an Usher or Greeter.
o Assists in preparing and assisting in Yearly Novena Masses.
o Also assists in most formal Church events as well in youth retreats.
• Service Learning Project (11th)
o Project consisted of research on Energy Alternatives.
o My group was responsible for creating brochures outlining the positives of energy alternatives and distributing them among the community.
• Red Cross Blood Donor
o Active and regular Blood Donor.
Athletic Involvement:
• Weight-lifting (2008-2009)
o Weight-lift generally five times a week focusing on strength training.
o Experimented on training techniques such as Mark Rippetoe’s 5x5 and Cluster Training.
o Experienced a boost in strength and muscle mass in the period of one year. Gained 30 lbs of muscle mass maintaining 13-12 percent body fat.
• Basketball (9th, 10th, 11th, 12th)
o Active player in Chase Basketball League since 2006.
o Voted “Most Outstanding Player” in the League
o Led team to the finals of the 2008 Fall League
Leadership Positions:
• Senior Alter Server (10th, 11th, 12th)
o Responsible for assisting in organizing other Alter Server’s schedules. This includes contacting and replacing alter servers for mass.
o Also responsible for training new alter servers and coordinating their duties before and during mass.
o Given privileges to serve in special masses such as Christmas, Easter, Jubilees, and Bishop served masses.
• Group Leader and Programmer (11th)
o Served as the Group Leader for an Engineering Course offered by Cal State Northridge
o Responsible for organizing and overlooking the schedule and duties of the members of my group.
o Also responsible for programming the core of our VEX robot and coordinating the rest of my team’s abilities to maximize our success.
• California Scholarship Federation (12th)
o Elected Vice President of Events
o Responsible for organizing club activities and activity logistics.
o Also responsible in, but not limited to, assisting President in scheduling activities and coordinating events team.
• Assistant Systems Administrator (9th, 10th, 12th)
o Responsible for coordinating teams of student technicians in troubleshooting computer problems.
o Also responsible for instructing student technicians on assisting teachers and troubleshooting computer problems.
• Robotics Club
o Founder and elected Vice President
o Lead Team Programmer
Academic Achievements:
• Advanced Placement Scholar with Honors (11th, 12th)
o National Advanced Placement Award
• Principal Scholarship Award (10th, 11th)
o Honors (Winter 2008)
o High Honors (Spring 2008)
o High Honors (Winter 2009)
o High Honors (Spring 2009)
• Phi Theta Kappa (11th, 12th)
o Honors Society Affiliation (Honors Program at Pierce College)
• Alpha Gamma Sigma (11th, 12th)
o Honors Society Affiliation (Honors Program at Pierce College)
• California Scholarship Federation Scholar (10th, 11th, 12th)
o Honors Society at Chatsworth High School
o Active Member
Civic Involvement:
• Assistant Basketball Coach (9th grade - 2007)
o Coached in the Pee Wee division at Chatsworth Park, Chatsworth, Ca
o Responsible for, but not limited to, assisting head coach in teaching children the fundamental concepts of basketball as well as instilling hard work and competition in their character.
o In charge of the logistics and organization of equipment and schedules for practice and games.
• Assistant Systems Administrator (9th, 10th, 12th)
o Active Student computer technician since 2006 at Lawrence Middle School
o Primarily responsible for assisting the systems administrator in troubleshooting network and computer problems.
o Helped maintain the functionality of the school’s Local Access Network.
o Also identified and audited the network security of the school.
o Given the responsibility in educating teachers and staff of network security in a weekend seminar with the purpose of preventing future exploits. (2007)
• Alter Server (9th, 10th, 11th, 12th)
o Active Alter Server since 2005 at St. Joseph the Worker.
o Responsibilities include assisting and preparing in setting up mass, as well as cleaning up after.
o Primarily responsible for assisting priest during mass and carrying out assigned duties by Senior Alter Server.
• League Deputy Commissioner (11th, 12th)
o League Deputy Commissioner for Chase Basketball League.
o Responsibilities include but not limited to assisting the commissioner in planning and organizing the bi-annual basketball league.
o Also responsible in preparing the league schedules, ordering uniforms, collecting team fees, and etc
• Church Youth Minister (10th, 11th, 12th)
o Responsible for assisting in Youth Masses as either an Usher or Greeter.
o Assists in preparing and assisting in Yearly Novena Masses.
o Also assists in most formal Church events as well in youth retreats.
• Service Learning Project (11th)
o Project consisted of research on Energy Alternatives.
o My group was responsible for creating brochures outlining the positives of energy alternatives and distributing them among the community.
• Red Cross Blood Donor
o Active and regular Blood Donor.
Athletic Involvement:
• Weight-lifting (2008-2009)
o Weight-lift generally five times a week focusing on strength training.
o Experimented on training techniques such as Mark Rippetoe’s 5x5 and Cluster Training.
o Experienced a boost in strength and muscle mass in the period of one year. Gained 30 lbs of muscle mass maintaining 13-12 percent body fat.
• Basketball (9th, 10th, 11th, 12th)
o Active player in Chase Basketball League since 2006.
o Voted “Most Outstanding Player” in the League
o Led team to the finals of the 2008 Fall League
Leadership Positions:
• Senior Alter Server (10th, 11th, 12th)
o Responsible for assisting in organizing other Alter Server’s schedules. This includes contacting and replacing alter servers for mass.
o Also responsible for training new alter servers and coordinating their duties before and during mass.
o Given privileges to serve in special masses such as Christmas, Easter, Jubilees, and Bishop served masses.
• Group Leader and Programmer (11th)
o Served as the Group Leader for an Engineering Course offered by Cal State Northridge
o Responsible for organizing and overlooking the schedule and duties of the members of my group.
o Also responsible for programming the core of our VEX robot and coordinating the rest of my team’s abilities to maximize our success.
• California Scholarship Federation (12th)
o Elected Vice President of Events
o Responsible for organizing club activities and activity logistics.
o Also responsible in, but not limited to, assisting President in scheduling activities and coordinating events team.
• Assistant Systems Administrator (9th, 10th, 12th)
o Responsible for coordinating teams of student technicians in troubleshooting computer problems.
o Also responsible for instructing student technicians on assisting teachers and troubleshooting computer problems.
• Robotics Club
o Founder and elected Vice President
o Lead Team Programmer
Academic Achievements:
• Advanced Placement Scholar with Honors (11th, 12th)
o National Advanced Placement Award
• Principal Scholarship Award (10th, 11th)
o Honors (Winter 2008)
o High Honors (Spring 2008)
o High Honors (Winter 2009)
o High Honors (Spring 2009)
• Phi Theta Kappa (11th, 12th)
o Honors Society Affiliation (Honors Program at Pierce College)
• Alpha Gamma Sigma (11th, 12th)
o Honors Society Affiliation (Honors Program at Pierce College)
• California Scholarship Federation Scholar (10th, 11th, 12th)
o Honors Society at Chatsworth High School
o Active Member