USAFA Additional Essay (format)

FØB Zero

Enthusiastically American
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Howdy,
the last essay question on the USAFA application states to enter any additional information that may be useful. Since there are such differing topics I would like to include, do you think it would be OK to split my essay into 2-3 paragraphs without connecting them?
I will give an example of the format I am considering....

ATHLETICS: (insert essay here)

HOME DUTIES: (insert essay here)

SCIENCE OLYMPIAD: (insert essay here)

Or should I focus on transitioning between the topics smoothly? (Which I am having a lot of difficulty doing.)
 

FlyFalcon

Falcon Foundation Scholar (NWP 2021)
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Try and make a connection with your thesis so based off what you wrote it would like leadership. "I show leadership blah in the following ways blah blah" ( obviously make this nice and pretty) this makes it easier to connect because even if you do it badly you already stated how you want this seen.
 

JP51

2025 Appointee
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Try connecting the topics like how does one thing affect your ability in the other. I mean really everything you do can be tied in together and ultimately tell who you are and how you perform.
 
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