usna1985
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Keep in mind that USNA isn't looking for your essay to stand out among 18,000 applicants. They've used the same essay topic for the last 20 years. That's 36,000 essays. Chances of yours being unique aren't good. WRT the essays, USNA is looking for whether you can pull together coherent thoughts and express yourself well with few words. Within reason, the answer itself isn't as important as how you compose it.
In terms of the generic "Why do you want to attend?," start with why YOU want to attend. Avoid giving an answer just because you think it's what USNA or your MOC or BGO wants to hear. Select a 1-2 facts or a SHORT story that supports that reason. Consider why you're opting for Navy/USMC without disparaging other services.
Write it down and then leave it. Come back to it several days later. Refine it. Show it to an adult to provide comments and proofread, but don't let an adult write it (trust me, folks who read these all day long can tell when a parent / adult has written or heavily influenced it).
If you are planning to speak to it (vs. write an essay), practice, but don't rehearse. What's the difference? Rehearsed sounds like you memorized something and are just parroting it back. Practice means you've thought through what you will say but haven't written it down and memorized it.
In terms of the generic "Why do you want to attend?," start with why YOU want to attend. Avoid giving an answer just because you think it's what USNA or your MOC or BGO wants to hear. Select a 1-2 facts or a SHORT story that supports that reason. Consider why you're opting for Navy/USMC without disparaging other services.
Write it down and then leave it. Come back to it several days later. Refine it. Show it to an adult to provide comments and proofread, but don't let an adult write it (trust me, folks who read these all day long can tell when a parent / adult has written or heavily influenced it).
If you are planning to speak to it (vs. write an essay), practice, but don't rehearse. What's the difference? Rehearsed sounds like you memorized something and are just parroting it back. Practice means you've thought through what you will say but haven't written it down and memorized it.